Angel Pons has posted comments on this change. ( https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770 )
Change subject: Documentation: Add MacBook internal flashing tutorial ......................................................................
Patch Set 2: Code-Review+1
(6 comments)
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... File Documentation/flash_tutorial/int_macbook.md:
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 7: prodecure procedure
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 10: have external Now you need the 'an':
have *an* external
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 17: iMac13,1 Every other model uses spaces :S
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 59: flash small flash *a* small
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 60: move reset move *the* reset
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 286: have completely have *a* completely