
Angel Pons has posted comments on this change. ( https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770 ) Change subject: Documentation: Add MacBook internal flashing tutorial ...................................................................... Patch Set 2: Code-Review+1 (6 comments) https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... File Documentation/flash_tutorial/int_macbook.md: https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 7: prodecure procedure https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 10: have external Now you need the 'an': have *an* external https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 17: iMac13,1 Every other model uses spaces :S https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 59: flash small flash *a* small https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 60: move reset move *the* reset https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770/2/Documentation/flash_tutoria... PS2, Line 286: have completely have *a* completely -- To view, visit https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/38770 To unsubscribe, or for help writing mail filters, visit https://review.coreboot.org/settings Gerrit-Project: coreboot Gerrit-Branch: master Gerrit-Change-Id: I2650d5d60db7a29a1567e44e89b785def9342df2 Gerrit-Change-Number: 38770 Gerrit-PatchSet: 2 Gerrit-Owner: Evgeny Zinoviev <me@ch1p.io> Gerrit-Reviewer: Angel Pons <th3fanbus@gmail.com> Gerrit-Reviewer: Evgeny Zinoviev <me@ch1p.io> Gerrit-Reviewer: Nico Huber <nico.h@gmx.de> Gerrit-Reviewer: Peter Lemenkov <lemenkov@gmail.com> Gerrit-Reviewer: build bot (Jenkins) <no-reply@coreboot.org> Gerrit-CC: Paul Menzel <paulepanter@users.sourceforge.net> Gerrit-Comment-Date: Sat, 15 Feb 2020 22:03:15 +0000 Gerrit-HasComments: Yes Gerrit-Has-Labels: Yes Gerrit-MessageType: comment