Paul Menzel has posted comments on this change. ( https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/41259 )
Change subject: Documentation/releases: Update for 4.12 ......................................................................
Patch Set 2: Code-Review+1
(3 comments)
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/41259/2/Documentation/releases/core... File Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.12-relnotes.md:
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/41259/2/Documentation/releases/core... PS2, Line 50: Clean Up I would use the noun: Cleanup.
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/cleanup
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/41259/2/Documentation/releases/core... File Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.13-relnotes.md:
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/41259/2/Documentation/releases/core... PS2, Line 4: The 4.13 release is planned for November 2020 Please add a dot/period at the end of the sentence.
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/41259/2/Documentation/releases/core... PS2, Line 7: notes. 1. Does it fit on the line above? 2. Add a blank line below?