Paul Menzel has posted comments on this change. ( https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948 )
Change subject: Documentation/releases: Finalize 4.11, start 4.12 ......................................................................
Patch Set 1:
(8 comments)
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... File Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.11-relnotes.md:
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 12: what is it what it is
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 18: clean up cleanup
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https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 26: The code across Intel's chipsets was unified some more into drivers : for common function blocks, an effort we're more confident will : succeed now that Intel itself is driving it. Re-format for block (line length)?
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 34: that Remove?
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 34: CannonLake Cannon Lake
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 35: that follow following
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 50: Siemens' Siemens to be consistent with the words before?
https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/36948/1/Documentation/releases/core... PS1, Line 59: Tigerlake Tiger Lake