[SeaBIOS] [PATCH] docs: fix various typos and inconsistency
piotr.krol at 3mdeb.com
Wed Oct 19 14:38:45 CEST 2016
On Wed, Oct 19, 2016 at 07:57:59AM -0400, Kevin O'Connor wrote:
> On Wed, Oct 19, 2016 at 01:35:04PM +0200, Piotr Król wrote:
> > On Tue, Oct 18, 2016 at 07:33:18PM -0400, Kevin O'Connor wrote:
> > > On Sun, Oct 16, 2016 at 10:31:46PM +0200, Piotr Król wrote:
> > > > -will instruct SeaBIOS to attempt to boot from the given USB drive
> > > > +Will instruct SeaBIOS to attempt to boot from the given USB drive
> > > > first and then attempt the given ATA harddrive second.
> > > >
> > > > SeaBIOS also supports a special "HALT" directive. If a line that
> > >
> > > The text here is is a continuation of the sentence above it and is not
> > > a start of a new sentence.
> > So this is inconsistent across documentation in most places there is big
> > letter after code section, this was the only place where small letter
> > was used.
> > ie. big letter after code section:
> > https://review.coreboot.org/cgit/seabios.git/tree/docs/Runtime_config.md#n151
> > https://review.coreboot.org/cgit/seabios.git/tree/docs/Runtime_config.md#n49
> > I'm not sure how those are different then:
> It didn't seem right to capitalize it because "will instruct SeaBIOS
> to attempt to boot from the given USB drive ..." is not a valid
> sentence - it lacks a subject. It could be reworded into a sentence
> and then capitalized.
Ok agree - I'm not native English, so this was not clear to me.
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