Wow, Iru, it's a great presentation, I bet you have spent quite a lot time to make it happen.
I'm excited more contributors from China too, I noticed some Chinese companies have deployed coreboot/FSP on their platform in recent years, I would like to encourage them involving in the coreboot community.
It might be too late to have the suggestions now, but it should be always useful in the future.
1. I would suggest you emphasis coreboot can support different CPU, such as IA/ARM/ARM64/MIPS/Power8 etc.
-Fei