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Signed-off-by: Patrik Tesarik <mail@patrik-tesarik.de>
Change-Id: I2eb60f507bc67b3bbacaf62f958d069dc7fa0201
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D 3rdparty/amd_blobs
M Documentation/tutorial/part1.md
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git pull ssh://review.coreboot.org:29418/coreboot refs/changes/02/38302/1

diff --git a/3rdparty/amd_blobs b/3rdparty/amd_blobs
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index cf22731..0000000
--- a/3rdparty/amd_blobs
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-Subproject commit cf227316b0fbd3995854ce21e81a63270b29bfb5
diff --git a/Documentation/tutorial/part1.md b/Documentation/tutorial/part1.md
index 14f7604..cb0640e 100644
--- a/Documentation/tutorial/part1.md
+++ b/Documentation/tutorial/part1.md
@@ -9,9 +9,8 @@
 
 ### Step 1 - Install tools and libraries needed for coreboot
     $ sudo apt-get install -y bison build-essential curl flex git gnat libncurses5-dev m4 zlib1g-dev
-    $ sudo pacman -S base-devel curl git gcc-ada ncurses zlib  
-    $ sudo dnf install git make gcc-gnat flex bison xz bzip2 gcc g++ ncurses-devel
-wget zlib-devel
+    $ sudo pacman -S base-devel curl git gcc-ada ncurses zlib
+    $ sudo dnf install git make gcc-gnat flex bison xz bzip2 gcc g++ ncurses-devel wget zlib-devel
 
 ### Step 2 - Download coreboot source tree
     $ git clone https://review.coreboot.org/coreboot
@@ -85,12 +84,12 @@
     $ sudo dnf install qemu
 
 ### Step 8 - Run QEMU
-Start QEMU and point it to the ROM you just built:
+Start QEMU, and point it to the ROM you just built:
 
     $ qemu-system-x86_64 -bios build/coreboot.rom -serial stdio
     $ qemu-system-i386 -bios build/coreboot.rom -serial stdio
 
-You should see the serial output of coreboot in the original console window and
+You should see the serial output of coreboot in the original console window and,
 a new window will appear running the coreinfo payload.
 
 Summary
@@ -99,7 +98,7 @@
 ### Step 1 summary - Install tools and libraries needed for coreboot
 You installed the minimum additional requirements either for Debian, CentOS or
 Arch based distributions to download and
-build coreboot. Ubuntu and ArchLinux already has most of the other tools that 
+build coreboot. Ubuntu and ArchLinux already has most of the other tools that
 would be required installed by default.
 
 * `build-essential` or `base-devel` are the basic tools for doing builds.  It 
@@ -110,8 +109,8 @@
 are needed to build the coreboot toolchain. `gcc` and `gnat` have to be
 of the same version.
 
-If you started with a different distribution that does not use apt, yum or 
-pacman as its package manager, you might need to install other packages. 
+If you started with a different distribution that does not use apt, yum or
+pacman as its package manager, you might need to install other packages.
 Most likely they are named differently depending on your distribution.
 
 ### Step 2 summary - Download coreboot source tree
@@ -162,8 +161,8 @@
 displayed the contents of the rom file.
 
 ### Step 7 summary - Install QEMU
-QEMU is a processor emulator which we can use to show the coreboot boot 
-process in a virtualised environment. 
+QEMU is a processor emulator which we can use to show the coreboot boot
+process in a virtualised environment.
 
 ### Step 8 summary - Run QEMU
 Here's the command line broken down:
@@ -171,7 +170,7 @@
 This starts the QEMU emulator with the i440FX host PCI bridge and PIIX3 PCI to
 ISA bridge.
 * `-bios build/coreboot.rom`
-Use the bios rom image that we just built. If this flag is left out, the 
+Use the bios rom image that we just built. If this flag is left out, the
 standard SeaBIOS image that comes with QEMU is used.
 * `-serial stdio`
 Send the serial output to the console. This allows you to view the coreboot

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